Haiku My Heart: Evening


Rialto Evening © 2010 Meri Arnett-Kremian. All rights reserved



evening comes bringing
soft light, blue and amethyst
tears fall unbidden




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Comments

rebecca said…
you wear this call to simplicity
with tender
beauty.

always
you enter my heart.


never stop.

xxoxoxoxo,
rebecca
July 2, 2010 at 7:54 AM
deb did it said…
this is so sincere, so revealing, so tender
July 2, 2010 at 8:24 AM
Bill said…
Just lovely -- the image and the poetry! Thank you for your recent visit and for the kind comment you left. When I see the wonderful photographs you've been taking, I'm humbled at your generosity in complimenting my work.

Warmest regards,
Bill
July 2, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Delwyn said…
Hi Meri

those few eleven words are heavy with emotion and significance...

Happy days
July 2, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Delphyne said…
This haiku is really lovely - unbidden tears at the sight of such beauty.
July 2, 2010 at 10:38 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said…
one evening
is not long enough—
endless tears

Haiku My Heart … Suddenly!
July 2, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Anonymous said…
simply to the point....

x..x
July 2, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Kim Andersen said…
the things that are unbidden .... some of the greatest treasure there is
July 2, 2010 at 3:49 PM
paper-n-soul said…
There is a subtle sense of loneliness yet safety in the falling dusk, in both photo and poem. Very lovely.
July 2, 2010 at 4:33 PM
A.Smith said…
I love it. Just that. Absolutely gorgeous both the shot and the words.
Ah, Venezia...it does things to the heart...
July 2, 2010 at 6:39 PM
jabblog said…
Beautiful photograph - the colours in the sky are wonderful - and your haiku is just perfect.
July 3, 2010 at 9:29 AM
Sarah said…
I love the words to accompany your beautiful picture and the surprise of the emotion in the last line.
July 3, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Relyn Lawson said…
That image!! That image has me sighing and dreaming. I adore it!

I was just dropping in to wish you the happiest Independence Day. May your day be full! May you enjoy laughter shared with family, great food shared with friends, fireworks to make you gasp, a lump in your throat at the anthem, and a full and grateful heart at all we have been given. Happy Fourth of July, my friend!
July 3, 2010 at 6:13 PM
beth said…
amethyst eyes....
i'd like to swim in eyes that color....at least once !
July 4, 2010 at 9:42 AM
normana53 said…
Sisters cause laughter
though sometimes annoying
still have to love them
July 6, 2010 at 9:24 AM
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