Friday, July 2, 2010

Haiku My Heart: Evening


Rialto Evening © 2010 Meri Arnett-Kremian. All rights reserved



evening comes bringing
soft light, blue and amethyst
tears fall unbidden




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16 comments:

rebecca said...

you wear this call to simplicity
with tender
beauty.

always
you enter my heart.


never stop.

xxoxoxoxo,
rebecca

deb did it said...

this is so sincere, so revealing, so tender

Bill said...

Just lovely -- the image and the poetry! Thank you for your recent visit and for the kind comment you left. When I see the wonderful photographs you've been taking, I'm humbled at your generosity in complimenting my work.

Warmest regards,
Bill

Delwyn said...

Hi Meri

those few eleven words are heavy with emotion and significance...

Happy days

Delphyne said...

This haiku is really lovely - unbidden tears at the sight of such beauty.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

one evening
is not long enough—
endless tears

Haiku My Heart … Suddenly!

Stephanie said...

simply to the point....

x..x

Kim Andersen said...

the things that are unbidden .... some of the greatest treasure there is

turquoise cro said...

Lovely!!!

paper-n-soul said...

There is a subtle sense of loneliness yet safety in the falling dusk, in both photo and poem. Very lovely.

Allegra Smith said...

I love it. Just that. Absolutely gorgeous both the shot and the words.
Ah, Venezia...it does things to the heart...

jabblog said...

Beautiful photograph - the colours in the sky are wonderful - and your haiku is just perfect.

Sarah said...

I love the words to accompany your beautiful picture and the surprise of the emotion in the last line.

Relyn said...

That image!! That image has me sighing and dreaming. I adore it!

I was just dropping in to wish you the happiest Independence Day. May your day be full! May you enjoy laughter shared with family, great food shared with friends, fireworks to make you gasp, a lump in your throat at the anthem, and a full and grateful heart at all we have been given. Happy Fourth of July, my friend!

beth said...

amethyst eyes....
i'd like to swim in eyes that color....at least once !

normana53 said...

Sisters cause laughter
though sometimes annoying
still have to love them