Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Fascination with Haiku


I'll give you a haiku-less post tomorrow
but for today, another one.



stone tears coalesce
cling somehow to an eyelid
sorrow  spilling out 


8 comments:

mouse (aka kimy) said...

beautiful haiku and image

GrandmaK said...

Well done. Picture is lovely too! Cathy

Reya Mellicker said...

What a beautiful picture. Gorgeous poem. You should write whatever you want here!

Naquillity said...

so tenderly written. very expressive and beautifully done. i think everyone needs to express their sorrows occasionally so as not to let it consume them.

your day lily haiku is really nice too. love the fireworks line. have a great night.

jinksy said...

The gentle side of sorrow...

Noelle Renee said...

The photo reminds me of a Herman Hesse novel, Siddhartha. It is a beautiful and heart-opening haiku about the sacredness of tears. Profoundly tender.

Sydney said...

Lovely. Haikiu's always escaped me. Thank you for stopping by my blog. I don't write on that one enough anymore, now that I spend my days writing in a full time job. I hope you come back again!

ELK said...

quiet brilliance .elk